graham blamey
2005-03-02 08:50:11 UTC
Hi James.
Thanks for your Owner Review. Please find below my edit comments on your Review. Please take these comments in the spirit that they are intended. They are given in my role as Edit Moderator and they are here to assist you in the process of meeting the expectations of BackpackGearTest.org and assisting you in becoming a BackpackGearTest.org official tester.
I appreciate that they may seem daunting and harsh at times. There is no criticism implied, that is not the intention, it is the nature of the task and the communication medium.
This is a good start James and I like the way you've put this review together. Ther's a limit to what one can say about a knife, but you've dealt with it well by citing all the scanarios where you've used the knife and how it behaved. Generally the review is fine, but there are two main areas for you to work in and I've explained these below. Once you have worked through these edits, please repost with REPOST in the subject line and I'll take another look .
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Graham BGT Edit Moderator
EDITS>
### this next applies to the following block of text, your background. In the future we hope to have a place on BGT.org where members can put an expanded bio possibly with photos as well, but for the purposes of Owner Reviews and/or Test Reports the idea is that the bio is a 'brief' summary of you and your style. I have indicated (below) where you could delete a large chunk of yours, but you might feel that you would be better re-writing it, if so, try to keep it to under 100 words.
### an approximate weight of the knife would be good here
The balance is actually just fore of the
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Thanks for your Owner Review. Please find below my edit comments on your Review. Please take these comments in the spirit that they are intended. They are given in my role as Edit Moderator and they are here to assist you in the process of meeting the expectations of BackpackGearTest.org and assisting you in becoming a BackpackGearTest.org official tester.
I appreciate that they may seem daunting and harsh at times. There is no criticism implied, that is not the intention, it is the nature of the task and the communication medium.
This is a good start James and I like the way you've put this review together. Ther's a limit to what one can say about a knife, but you've dealt with it well by citing all the scanarios where you've used the knife and how it behaved. Generally the review is fine, but there are two main areas for you to work in and I've explained these below. Once you have worked through these edits, please repost with REPOST in the subject line and I'll take another look .
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Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 175 lbs
Location: Olds, Alberta, Canada
Date: 21 Feb 2005
### BGT is accessed Globally, so for the benefit of our International readers, we ask you to provide metric equivalent for ALL measurements. This usually takes this form, '...Height: 5' 11" (1.8 m)...' '...Weight: 175 lb (79 kg)...' You need to do this everywhere you have a measurement, miles, pounds, ounces, inches etc. A conversion tool can be found on the main BGT.org website.Weight: 175 lbs
Location: Olds, Alberta, Canada
Date: 21 Feb 2005
### this next applies to the following block of text, your background. In the future we hope to have a place on BGT.org where members can put an expanded bio possibly with photos as well, but for the purposes of Owner Reviews and/or Test Reports the idea is that the bio is a 'brief' summary of you and your style. I have indicated (below) where you could delete a large chunk of yours, but you might feel that you would be better re-writing it, if so, try to keep it to under 100 words.
I've been an avid outdoorsman since I was old enough to be safely stowed
as bagagge in my parents' canoe: hiking, canoeing and camping all over
###should be '...baggage...'as bagagge in my parents' canoe: hiking, canoeing and camping all over
Ontario and Quebec with my parents, outripping summer camps and Boy
Scouts.
DELETE FROM HERE>Scouts.
When I was 12 I joined the Royal Canadian Air Cadets and became
a survival instructor with that group at 15. The 6 week course included
a 10 day 5 person SWAFT (Survival Without A Functioning Thing), a 72 hr
solo in summer Northern Quebec and various lectures and lessons on
shelter building, edible wildlife, fires, signals and first aid. When I
was 17 I joined the Canadian Forces Reserve as an Anti-Armour
Infantryman and got lots of experience strapping heavy loads to various
parts of my anatomy and walking/trotting/climbing very long distances
through diverse terrain before bivvying up for the night in a trench
rapidly filling with water/mud. Prior to that, I worked as a Park
Ranger in Algonquin Park, Ontario cutting trails, moving outhouses and
helping to patrol canoe routes in the northern backcountry.
END DELETE HERE>a survival instructor with that group at 15. The 6 week course included
a 10 day 5 person SWAFT (Survival Without A Functioning Thing), a 72 hr
solo in summer Northern Quebec and various lectures and lessons on
shelter building, edible wildlife, fires, signals and first aid. When I
was 17 I joined the Canadian Forces Reserve as an Anti-Armour
Infantryman and got lots of experience strapping heavy loads to various
parts of my anatomy and walking/trotting/climbing very long distances
through diverse terrain before bivvying up for the night in a trench
rapidly filling with water/mud. Prior to that, I worked as a Park
Ranger in Algonquin Park, Ontario cutting trails, moving outhouses and
helping to patrol canoe routes in the northern backcountry.
I currently work with an Army Cadet group as a fieldcraft instructor, specialising
in orienteering, backpacking and adventure racing. I enjoy hiking and
backpacking with my wife and dog in the nearby Canadian Rocky
Mountains. I've experienced a diverse range of outdoor equipment and
enjoy trying out new gear as harshly as I can.
### you should add a sentence about your current backpacking style, tent. tarp, hammocks; all bar the kitchen sink or ultra-light etc.in orienteering, backpacking and adventure racing. I enjoy hiking and
backpacking with my wife and dog in the nearby Canadian Rocky
Mountains. I've experienced a diverse range of outdoor equipment and
enjoy trying out new gear as harshly as I can.
(http://www.grohmannknives.com/pages/r100s.html)
### you don't need to include a link to the individual product, only the top level of the site (as you have). Individual pages can change, but it is unlikely that the top level will.Blade Length: 5-1/4"
### you need to include the metric equivalent here so: 51/4" (133 mm) (millimetres is the most suitable for something this size)### an approximate weight of the knife would be good here
Price: ~$75-90 CAD (Paid $65 CAD at auction)
### at BGT we only allow the Manufacturer's Suggested Retail Price (MSRP) (You can mention in your Product Description the price you paid at auction, but the MSRP is what someone could expect to pay unless they found their own deal)This knife features a full tang, full bolster rosewood handle that fits
comfortably in the hand.
### this would read better as '...This fixed blade knife features a full tang, full bolster and rosewood...' etc.comfortably in the hand.
The balance is actually just fore of the
bolster though it feels balanced right at the junction of tang and
blade. It has an excellent lanyard attachment and the full leather
### this would be better as '...lanyard attachment point...'blade. It has an excellent lanyard attachment and the full leather
outdoor knives. Each knife is individually forged and then hand ground
by a team of artisans from a solid bar of high carbon stainless steel.
### This sentence doesn't read quite right, try '...Each knife is individually forged from a solid bar of high carbon stainless steel and then hand ground by a team of artisans...'by a team of artisans from a solid bar of high carbon stainless steel.
Scenario #1: Roast beef at home.
The knife, while too short to be effective at cutting large roasts, flew
through the task of carving smaller roasts, showing very little tearing
of the meat and achieving an almost surgical cut for as long as the cut
could be maintained. After cutting up a 4lb roast, the blade did not
### if you use 4 lb here, you should include the metric equivalent, which would disrupt the flow so why not stick to '...cutting up a small roast...' and avoid it :)The knife, while too short to be effective at cutting large roasts, flew
through the task of carving smaller roasts, showing very little tearing
of the meat and achieving an almost surgical cut for as long as the cut
could be maintained. After cutting up a 4lb roast, the blade did not
Many knives tend to dull quickly after cutting through cardboard boxes
in order to make them fit in the trash can. This knife made it through
23 before needing to be rehoned with a steel in order to keep the
cardboard material from tearing while the cuts were made. Overall, it
lasted longer then a carpentry exacto knife.
### should be '...than a carpentry...'in order to make them fit in the trash can. This knife made it through
23 before needing to be rehoned with a steel in order to keep the
cardboard material from tearing while the cuts were made. Overall, it
lasted longer then a carpentry exacto knife.
the nail and pry it up. I then rehammered the nail using the tang in
the knife handle. The knife showed (and still shows) no damage from the
exercise.
### well if it didn't show damage then it won't show it now :) You should delete '...(and still shows)...'the knife handle. The knife showed (and still shows) no damage from the
exercise.
Scenario #6: Skinning and cleaning a Rabbit.
This tests the precision of the knife tip and flexibility of the knife
blade. Sadly, the knife performed poorly in this test, requiring a lot
of time to work enough of the tip under the skin to get a good incision
going. Manouvring the blade through the cuts required to clean the
### should be '...Manoeuvring...'This tests the precision of the knife tip and flexibility of the knife
blade. Sadly, the knife performed poorly in this test, requiring a lot
of time to work enough of the tip under the skin to get a good incision
going. Manouvring the blade through the cuts required to clean the
carcass was labourious and unwieldly. This knife is not well suited for
### should be '...laborious...' and '...unwieldy...'Scenario #7: Can Opener
Testing the strength of the knife tip is often best experienced when
trying to punch holes through cans of condensed milk for morning
coffee. The edge is often ruined as it passes through the metal and the
tip is often broken off if the blow is not directly down the blade. The
Grohmann #100 preformed flawlessly opening 10 cans (using two v-cuts and
### should be '...performed...'Testing the strength of the knife tip is often best experienced when
trying to punch holes through cans of condensed milk for morning
coffee. The edge is often ruined as it passes through the metal and the
tip is often broken off if the blow is not directly down the blade. The
Grohmann #100 preformed flawlessly opening 10 cans (using two v-cuts and
Scenario #8: Cutting Kern Mantle rope
### should be '...Kernmantle...'A straight edge often has a harder time cutting through the outer level
of a kern mantle rope and moving instead of cutting the interior
### '...kernmantle...' and if you have commas at '...moving, instead of cutting, the interior...' this will make this clearerof a kern mantle rope and moving instead of cutting the interior
The #100 is best suited as a general-purpose outdoor knife by those who
need something bigger then a swiss-army, but smaller then a machete and
like a straight-edge blade.
### This sentence reads a little awkwardly, try '...by those who like a straight-edged blade and need something bigger than a Swiss army knife, but smaller than a machete.need something bigger then a swiss-army, but smaller then a machete and
like a straight-edge blade.
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