j***@public.gmane.org
2003-05-30 13:59:22 UTC
Andy,
Thank you for your pack review. You have done a very good job and your
review is interesting. Below are some suggestions and edits for you to
include in your review. When you have completed the changes you must
resubmit it to the mailing list, with the word REPOST in the subject line.
Once it is approved by a Moderator, you will receive instructions on where
to upload the html version of the review.
Thank you for all your efforts.
James T.
BGT Edit Moderator
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[GENERAL COMMENT] This is a good report, Andy, but in the future I would
like to see more personal experience captured in the body of your report.
I don't really know how to describe it further than that... other than to
suggest you say things like "on a recent trip to Colorado, elevation 10,000
ft (3,00 m), I had the following experiences..." -or- "Generally, I pack my
pack with my down bag in the bottom, all my gear on top (stove, food,
water, etc.) and with my foam pad rolled up and tied to the outside."
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[REQUIRED INFORMATION]
Please add a Date to your review. Also, from the Survival Guide, you seem
to be missing the following section:
Field information
- Location or locations where the test was conducted
- Description of location (mountains, elevation, terrain, etc.)
- Weather conditions (temperature, precipitation, etc.)
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Other general edits:
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mostly 3 day trips with at least a 7 day trip per year.
[EDIT] Generally this would be 3-day and 7-day.
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I own a llama that was purchased when my 3rd child was 2, some 10 years
ago.
[COMMENT] With all the odd gear names out there, you might want to say
that this is "a real llama", or instead of saying "I own a llama that was
purchased" you could say "I have a pet llama, (name), that I bought..."
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followed by 9 additional purchases over the last 20 years; the
Professional, Wall Wizard, Frostfire II, Frostfire I, Daypack, Frostfire
II, Frostfire II, Mountainlight 4500, and Chimera.
[COMMENT] You might say "three Frostfire IIs" rather than Frostfire II,
Frostfire II, Frostfire II.
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but always came back to Mountainsmith when I want an internal frame.
[EDIT] when I want an internal frame *pack*.
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4510 cu in (74 liter)
5016 cubic in (6192 c.i extended) (82 liter)
~5016 cubic in (~6192 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
~5016 cubic in (~6192 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
[EDIT] Assuming these are the reported volumes, and you converted to ci
from liters, you should round off the numbers so that it doesn't look like
you measured them. (If you measured them, great! Tell us how.) I
suggest:
4500 cu in (74 liter)
5000 cubic in (6200 c.i extended) (82 liter)
~5000 cubic in (~6200 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
~5000 cubic in (~6200 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
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The Upper Delta strap is an adjustable nylon strap/nylon wedge combination
that attached to the back of the back about mid distance between top and
bottom.
[EDIT] Is it "back of the back" or "back of the PACK"? And, attached
should be attaches... and it should really be "which attaches" rather than
"that attaches".
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weights are handled adequately, with little creep and hip-belt does a good
job of remaining comfortable.
[EDIT] And THE hip-belt...
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The pack has been through numerous full days of rain, and as with most
packs a run cover is required.
[EDIT] Do you mean "run cover" or "rain cover"?
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They offer a lifetime warranty that isn't tied to original owner.
[EDIT] tied to THE original owner.
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They stopped manufacturing the basic pack and started adding features that
only weighted the pack.
[EDIT] "that only added weight to the pack" -or- "that only weighed the
pack down".
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From: "RAD,ANDY (HP-Boise,ex1)" <andy.rad-***@public.gmane.org>
Date: Mon May 26, 2003 10:48 am
Subject: OWNER REVIEW - Mountainsmith Frostfire II Backpack Series
Mountainsmith Frostfire II Backpacks & History Owner Review
Andy Rad
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Thank you for your pack review. You have done a very good job and your
review is interesting. Below are some suggestions and edits for you to
include in your review. When you have completed the changes you must
resubmit it to the mailing list, with the word REPOST in the subject line.
Once it is approved by a Moderator, you will receive instructions on where
to upload the html version of the review.
Thank you for all your efforts.
James T.
BGT Edit Moderator
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
[GENERAL COMMENT] This is a good report, Andy, but in the future I would
like to see more personal experience captured in the body of your report.
I don't really know how to describe it further than that... other than to
suggest you say things like "on a recent trip to Colorado, elevation 10,000
ft (3,00 m), I had the following experiences..." -or- "Generally, I pack my
pack with my down bag in the bottom, all my gear on top (stove, food,
water, etc.) and with my foam pad rolled up and tied to the outside."
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
[REQUIRED INFORMATION]
Please add a Date to your review. Also, from the Survival Guide, you seem
to be missing the following section:
Field information
- Location or locations where the test was conducted
- Description of location (mountains, elevation, terrain, etc.)
- Weather conditions (temperature, precipitation, etc.)
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
Other general edits:
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
mostly 3 day trips with at least a 7 day trip per year.
[EDIT] Generally this would be 3-day and 7-day.
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
I own a llama that was purchased when my 3rd child was 2, some 10 years
ago.
[COMMENT] With all the odd gear names out there, you might want to say
that this is "a real llama", or instead of saying "I own a llama that was
purchased" you could say "I have a pet llama, (name), that I bought..."
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
followed by 9 additional purchases over the last 20 years; the
Professional, Wall Wizard, Frostfire II, Frostfire I, Daypack, Frostfire
II, Frostfire II, Mountainlight 4500, and Chimera.
[COMMENT] You might say "three Frostfire IIs" rather than Frostfire II,
Frostfire II, Frostfire II.
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
but always came back to Mountainsmith when I want an internal frame.
[EDIT] when I want an internal frame *pack*.
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
4510 cu in (74 liter)
5016 cubic in (6192 c.i extended) (82 liter)
~5016 cubic in (~6192 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
~5016 cubic in (~6192 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
[EDIT] Assuming these are the reported volumes, and you converted to ci
from liters, you should round off the numbers so that it doesn't look like
you measured them. (If you measured them, great! Tell us how.) I
suggest:
4500 cu in (74 liter)
5000 cubic in (6200 c.i extended) (82 liter)
~5000 cubic in (~6200 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
~5000 cubic in (~6200 c.i. extended) (82 liter)
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
The Upper Delta strap is an adjustable nylon strap/nylon wedge combination
that attached to the back of the back about mid distance between top and
bottom.
[EDIT] Is it "back of the back" or "back of the PACK"? And, attached
should be attaches... and it should really be "which attaches" rather than
"that attaches".
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
weights are handled adequately, with little creep and hip-belt does a good
job of remaining comfortable.
[EDIT] And THE hip-belt...
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
The pack has been through numerous full days of rain, and as with most
packs a run cover is required.
[EDIT] Do you mean "run cover" or "rain cover"?
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
They offer a lifetime warranty that isn't tied to original owner.
[EDIT] tied to THE original owner.
=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+
They stopped manufacturing the basic pack and started adding features that
only weighted the pack.
[EDIT] "that only added weight to the pack" -or- "that only weighed the
pack down".
=+=+=+=END=+=+=+
++++++++++++++++
From: "RAD,ANDY (HP-Boise,ex1)" <andy.rad-***@public.gmane.org>
Date: Mon May 26, 2003 10:48 am
Subject: OWNER REVIEW - Mountainsmith Frostfire II Backpack Series
Mountainsmith Frostfire II Backpacks & History Owner Review
Andy Rad
<snip>
++++++++++++++++
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